First cut feeback

Today we presented our first cut of liabiltity to our peers, we recieved both positive and negative feedback today.

Some of the positive points were that our narrative fitted the tone of our song, one of our peers also commented that she liked some of the slow-motion shots that we included as she felt that they helped to reflect the sombre, slow tone of the song.

However, many of our peers informed us that the music video almost dragged and wasn't extremely engaging or interesting to watch; this is something that we were concerned about before recieving our feedback, therefore, this confirmed our worry that our music video just doesn't grip the viewer.

Another comment made was that the shot of the hands on the piano at the begining of the music video didn't quite flow in time with the music.

A few of our peers disliked the ending of our narrative as they were hoping for a plot twist or some light at the end of the tunnel, they felt that our ending was too morbid and deterministic.

Myself and Keeley shall try to salvage our product based on these feedback points, we are possibly considering trying a new song entirely as we feel that the slow and sombre nature of liability doesn't lend itself to the kind of exciting and gripping video that we are looking to create.